Changes between Version 20 and Version 21 of ApertureLicense

Timestamp:

10/10/05 21:49:35 (19 years ago)

Author:

anonymous

Comment:

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ApertureLicense

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 '''Built-in patent defense''' - when you sue someone (either a developer or a user) for a patent infringement related to this code, all your rights (patent- and copyright-related) for this codebase should be withdrawn. This defense should be formulated in a fair way, e.g. it should not involve infringements unrelated to this project, as some licenses (MPL, CPL) do.
 
-'''External deployment''' -  making a derivate work available as a service on a network to others outside your organisation should be considered as a form of distribution. The license should demand that under these circumstances the derivative should also be made available under the used open source license.
+'''External deployment''' -  making a derivate work available as a service on a network to others outside your organisation should be considered as a form of distribution. The license should demand that under these circumstances the derivative should also be made available under the chosen open source license.
 
 '''Local jurisdiction''' - we prefer a local court (i.e. Dutch or German, depending on who is involved) rather than one in California (MPL) or New York (CPL).